tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8400455429821166661.post8264322519642456532..comments2023-12-20T05:59:21.610-05:00Comments on Black-Eyed Susan's: NaPoWriMo #17susanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8400455429821166661.post-39077283176459536442009-04-18T11:44:00.000-04:002009-04-18T11:44:00.000-04:00Mary and Lisa, thank you for the feedback. I'll ke...Mary and Lisa, thank you for the feedback. I'll keep them in mind while revising. There was so many places my mind was going. Appreciate you helping me ground this.<br /><br />Thanks, Carol.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8400455429821166661.post-25756849969213459022009-04-18T11:42:00.000-04:002009-04-18T11:42:00.000-04:00Mrs. Gavin is something. She would kindly tell ten...Mrs. Gavin is something. She would kindly tell tenets not to park in her unmarked parking space. She'd let you know when maintenance was coming to plow the snow, "So please move your car early in the morning."<br />She put a canister out for cigarette buts. If a light went out, a door got stuck, we didn't wait long because she was sure to contact maintenance and she'd remind them until the work susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8400455429821166661.post-19951613972823492722009-04-18T11:35:00.000-04:002009-04-18T11:35:00.000-04:00With the passing seasons,
Mrs. Gavin had grown on ...<EM>With the passing seasons,<br />Mrs. Gavin had grown on me.</EM>This made me smile. I love the organic figures of speech twining throughout the poem. Mrs. Gavin must have been a very special person.Lisa Chellmanhttp://lisachellman.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8400455429821166661.post-83009864552678196442009-04-18T08:03:00.000-04:002009-04-18T08:03:00.000-04:00"Uprooted" is a good image to go with all of the r..."Uprooted" is a good image to go with all of the rest of the gardening in your poem. Glad to hear you will keep visiting her. Seems like maybe you are one of her sprouts. She'll enjoy watching you grow, too!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8400455429821166661.post-88052497655824984182009-04-18T07:00:00.000-04:002009-04-18T07:00:00.000-04:00Not rough at all. You've really captured something...Not rough at all. You've really captured something here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com