Monday, September 15, 2008

An American Sentence

A flock of black boxes flap their wings and tuck their tails for dollars.

6 comments:

Cloudscome said...

I really like this one Susan. I can just picture it and the tension is terrific.

I am so glad you stopped by my blog on a day when I had posted a haiku. Lately I have been a little sparse, with school starting and all. It's good to meet up with you again in the blogs.

Rethabile said...

Yeah, the sound is magnificent, too.

Regina Clare Jane said...

Oh, it's almost ike a tongue twister! I really liked this...
I'll have to find out what this American Sentence is all about... :)

Kimberlee said...

I really enjoyed this. :)

SweetTalking Guy.. said...

Yeah, this one works on more than one level.

susan said...

Thanks all, I apologized for the delayed response. Work life got in the way. lol