Friday, April 17, 2009

napowrimo #14

love smells good

like Nautica and Tide
and warm clothes
from the dryer
morning coffee kisses

PAD #14 write a love poem or anti-love poem

12 comments:

Serena said...

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Zetta Elliott said...

I'm glad you chose NOT to write the anti-love poem! this is lovely

Serena said...

This is gorgeous!

gautami tripathy said...

A very good love poem!

mortal thoughts

Bsquared86 said...
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Bsquared86 said...

love smells good, indeed. (my 3rd time trying to leave this comment . . . *crossesfingers*)

throwshiswords said...

This is absolutely my favorite kind of love poem, with the so-called mundane details of life that actually carry such deeper feeling. Thank you!

Here's a little poem I did a while back along the same lines, but I like your "coffee kisses" better :-)

Claudia said...

Lovely poem, I like the "morning coffee kisses" - and hey, your new layout is cool!!!

sydneysider said...

Yes, sweet and simple.
Very nice

Thinking Aloud said...

I finished doing the laundry and sat folding. I grabbed my aegean blue 100% combed Egyptian cotton towel and nestled my face deep.
It was love!

Kelly said...

I love this!
This is a different kind of love (I'll call it puppy love), but our new pup has that "puppy smell" and my husband just think she stinks, but since I am madly in love with her now, I think this lil love smells good! (Though I think he fell in love with her too as I see him sneak her kisses and scoop her up and escape with her into his office to curl up together).