Thursday, June 11, 2009


The news of another member being afflicted
is like the sloshing in a pitcher shaken
by an unexpected bump against its table.
We’re dangerously close to spilling our keepsakes
onto an already dirty floor.

Each week, Thom gives us three words to craft a work. This week, we have restless, dangerous and keepsake. To see more, visit 3WW.


Anonymous said...

"sloshing in a pitcher shaken..."

Wonderful word picture.

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

Great mental imagery here. You paint a picture that invites questions without really requiring one specific answer.

Tumblewords: said...

Nice - the word picture is vibrant and the thought is surely valid.

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful imagery I see here!

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