Sunday, December 16, 2007

Dance

Here is my Sunday Scribblings contribution- another American sentence.


Beneath blue lights I flood the floor like unstrung beads in a frenzied pour.

10 comments:

Lea said...

Ohhhhh I love the movement of this dance, those beads in pure ecstasy of freedom...

Amber said...

Something about this makes me think of musicians, like Janice Joplin, or even Joss Stone. People who let their music move them and dance and move on stage, under the lights... Isn't funny how people see different things when they read words?

:)

tumblewords said...

Wow! That Sentence is great! Moves and flows!

Robin said...

Great cadence!

gautami tripathy said...

That was perfect. To the point!

Dance of Life

Crafty Green Poet said...

wonderful movement in there

SusieJ said...

What a wonderfully powerful sentence.
SusieJ

LittleWing said...

like it...what a perfectly posed sentence...

Linda said...

I can't get those beads out of my head! Great sentence!

sister AE said...

the rhyme in there makes this stick in my brain. brilliant