A kind of beautysprouts tulips and ivory preens
clinking silver chimes
clinking silver chimes
Here's my contribution to one deep breath. I was inspired by the photo I believe taken by Jennifer at onb. I wanted readers to see what I saw. I won't leave the image up if I don't hear back from her.
11 comments:
Nice work. I particularly like the image of silver chimes!
This makes me think of the creative force which spurs new life and is unseen in the breeze.... thank you.
Came to holla.
This poem reminds me of spring. Lately, its been getting warmer and I'm surprisingly ready for it to be warm again, and we've not even hit the real cold time. So I'm thinking about those first days when the sun is coming through the cold to warm a face, and first daffodils in our area, and this poem gets me closer. Good one.
gorgeous imagery - even without the photo!
nice descriptions especially the last line - clinking silver chimes
I love ivory preens, it provides its own door.
jodi barone
lovely words painting a gorgeous image!
I love the delicacy of this haiku,
this is so very beautiful...
you have set a warm & delicate table with your beautiful words
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