Sunday, August 31, 2008

Somewhere

somewhere between lines
rounding my lobes and my lips
kisses rain sweetly




*feeling syrupy. Here's my submission for Sunday Scribblings

17 comments:

Paul said...

I'm amazed at how so few words can speak so beautifully.

totomai said...

lovely haiku. such a sweet thought

Shadow said...

aaaah, i like!!!!!

Linda Jacobs said...
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Linda Jacobs said...

Sorry about that other comment. I tried to leave a link to my reading blog but it didn't work right. I'll try one more time: here

Your haiku almost feels like kisses from children. I like the rain simile.

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

No, that's not syrupy. It's sensual and longing, two traits that are much more romantic!

Rambler said...

lovely haiku

ThomG said...

Great stuff, Susan. I remain a fan as well.

Patois said...

Syrup is surprisingly good for you, did you know that? Delicious, this one, syrupy or not.

Giggles said...

I could learn a few lessons from you!
I agree with Paul...beautiful!! I read a few more posts and you are on my google reader now!! Fun blog...love the Chocolate Britney Spears...you're so personable!

Peace Giggles
Thanks for stopping by!

christine said...

You're back! Good to see your poems.

Some sensual movement going on here.

Jade said...

sweet this.

susan said...

So many comments. Cool beans! Appreciate you all taking time to read and comment.

mgirl said...

kisses rain sweetly, I love the image that evokes.

Lela B said...

I really love your poem. After I read it I actually visualized someone standing all wet in rain. I am inspired Maybe I will paint that.

DeLi said...

thank you susan for visiting my place and leaving kind words... - DeLi

1,000 Faces of MotherHenna said...

sweeet!