Saturday, September 13, 2008

coffee suite

columbian roast
curls hips sunnyside up
giggles pop pop pop

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last year this time
we sifted grains not grinds
through our fingers

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sipping on you
flavor lingers into night
daily ritual


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20 comments:

Granny Smith said...

This is obviously about more than coffee. It is graceful suite of sweet haiku variations. A very interesting response to the prompt.

anthonynorth said...

Coffee used as some great metaphors there.

SmallWorld at Home said...

LOVE this. Great sounds, concise and efficient.

Preethi said...

Wonderful Haiku variations.. very interesting .. I love the second one.. last year this time we sifted grains not grinds!! :)

Thanks for your comment.. I am on the look out for critics.. because if people dont tell me what they find wrong with what I write, how will I ever grow as a writer? but doesn't work!! I think you were the first to notice the comment!!

ThomG said...

Efficient and enjoyable, like a good cup of coffee should be.

B. Roan said...

Nice piece! I enjoy the way the words flow.

Marty E. said...

nice haiku

totomai said...

nice set of haikus, particularly liked the 2nd and one. effective metaphor.

PS

regarding your comment in my post i thought the prompt was extended to daily addictions hence my post wasnt related that much to coffee

tumblewords said...

Very nice!

Rambler said...

"sipping on you
flavor lingers into night
daily ritual"

just loved this..

Linda Jacobs said...

These really are exquisite!

susan said...

Thank you all for taking time to read and comment.

naturalbookcraft said...

There's just somethign about coffee that brings this prompt such FLAVOUR!

thanks for your words.
namaste.

blissfulanonymity said...

Really nice.

Jade said...

oolala, su, java w/ some jo,
a few of my favorite things.

sweet write.

Redheels said...

Nice.....obviously you are talking about more than coffee well, I know I thought about other things. :)

Thanks for your comment.

susan said...

Redheels,

What do you mean? I can't think of a better way to enjoy my coffee. lol

1,000 Faces of MotherHenna said...

fabulous haiku
i love coffee so much, too...
A Diva's drink...True!

ha! (i'm a poet, but never said i was a *good* poet) :)
Miracles,
k-

Annamari said...

Susan,

I could never write like you - they way you capture the moment.

I really envy people that can write haiku's. And yours are good too.

texasblu said...

I like how you used the metaphors - one can take things any way they like with these.

Thanks for your invite. I'll come participate when I have a little more time - right now I'm in the middle of harvesting apples - fun, but time consuming!