Wonderful Haiku variations.. very interesting .. I love the second one.. last year this time we sifted grains not grinds!! :)
Thanks for your comment.. I am on the look out for critics.. because if people dont tell me what they find wrong with what I write, how will I ever grow as a writer? but doesn't work!! I think you were the first to notice the comment!!
I like how you used the metaphors - one can take things any way they like with these.
Thanks for your invite. I'll come participate when I have a little more time - right now I'm in the middle of harvesting apples - fun, but time consuming!
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This is obviously about more than coffee. It is graceful suite of sweet haiku variations. A very interesting response to the prompt.
Coffee used as some great metaphors there.
LOVE this. Great sounds, concise and efficient.
Wonderful Haiku variations.. very interesting .. I love the second one.. last year this time we sifted grains not grinds!! :)
Thanks for your comment.. I am on the look out for critics.. because if people dont tell me what they find wrong with what I write, how will I ever grow as a writer? but doesn't work!! I think you were the first to notice the comment!!
Efficient and enjoyable, like a good cup of coffee should be.
Nice piece! I enjoy the way the words flow.
nice haiku
nice set of haikus, particularly liked the 2nd and one. effective metaphor.
PS
regarding your comment in my post i thought the prompt was extended to daily addictions hence my post wasnt related that much to coffee
Very nice!
"sipping on you
flavor lingers into night
daily ritual"
just loved this..
These really are exquisite!
Thank you all for taking time to read and comment.
There's just somethign about coffee that brings this prompt such FLAVOUR!
thanks for your words.
namaste.
Really nice.
oolala, su, java w/ some jo,
a few of my favorite things.
sweet write.
Nice.....obviously you are talking about more than coffee well, I know I thought about other things. :)
Thanks for your comment.
Redheels,
What do you mean? I can't think of a better way to enjoy my coffee. lol
fabulous haiku
i love coffee so much, too...
A Diva's drink...True!
ha! (i'm a poet, but never said i was a *good* poet) :)
Miracles,
k-
Susan,
I could never write like you - they way you capture the moment.
I really envy people that can write haiku's. And yours are good too.
I like how you used the metaphors - one can take things any way they like with these.
Thanks for your invite. I'll come participate when I have a little more time - right now I'm in the middle of harvesting apples - fun, but time consuming!
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