Sunday, October 12, 2008

osi

Globes with glints of gold,
they are like shiny marbles.
His hazel eyes promise
a pocket full of kisses.


*This weeks prompt at One Single Impression is gold. Visit OSI to read more responses.

16 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Susan,
I can see those beautiful marbles!

Deborah Godin said...

Hard to resist that!

JP/deb said...

I love this little nugget of a poem ... awesome! JP/deb

p.s. thanks for your comment on my blog, we can share a soapbox anytime ;-)

christine said...

A glittering strophe. Nice work!
Musical.

anthonynorth said...

Ah, the expectancy in this. Perfect.

Geraldine said...

Absolutely perfect! What a great take on this marvelous prompt. Bravo!!!!

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Patois said...

That's pure loveliness!

fourwindshaiga said...

Well, that sounds nice. Have fun!

Annamari said...

I always liked hazel eyes, and now I love them even more ...:)

zoya gautam said...

..just lovely..many thanks..

Pam said...

My three favorite and loved people have hazel eyes and I have always thought the gold in their eyes was so beautiful. Thank you for this poem.

Beth P. said...

Promises of a pocket full of kisses...green gold or not, I'm sure they're nothing compared to your own black eyes!

Quiet Paths said...

Oh, intriguing eyes; do I sense a hint of restraint or expectant waiting? Very nice.

Tammy said...

What lovely globes of promise.

susan said...

Qp,
Growing up, my father would grab us and tickle us and ask how much we loved him. We squeal, "A thousand, thousand kisses, Daddy." My father has beautiful eyes that smiled on me. I am a daddy's girl true. Thank you.

mgirl said...

This is so sweet it makes me feel warm and fuzzy.
"His hazel eyes promise a pocket full of kisses."
Wonderful!