Billie smiled at the poor schmuck sitting at my bar. Of course he flushed redder than the shade on her pouty, perfect lips. Damn, her. Even her smile was indecent. If you saw Billie, you’d understand. She took great pleasure knowing how frustrated guys became around her.
In all fairness, Billie is no siren. She’s just your ungodly, curved in-all-the-right-places gal with hair thick as a mare’s mane and legs almost equally as long. When Billie walks into the room, all men instantly revert to prepubescent boys, clumsy and tongue-tied.
I’m the only one immune to her charms. I grew up with Billie when she was my little brother.
Thom host 3WW. This week's words: frustrate, indecent, understand. Not happy with my title. Any suggestions? Read more entries here.
16 comments:
I haven't seen this meme before. Very cool meme and very cool story!
Thanks Lorin,
I haven't participated in a long time. Thom is a very cool guy.
SA-WEET! Oh, man, L, you just nailed this. Nailed it. I enjoyed this so, so much.
As far as a new title, what about Curveballs?
Oh, man. Loved. It.
p(o)urrrfect! That last sentence turns it all upside down - you got to re-read it from the start.
LOL - good one, never saw it coming!
I love this. That *ahem* curve ball at the end was outstanding. Spot on...
You so nailed this.
A perfect story. Loved the ending.
Like that very much!
commas and all
Perfect!
Thank you all for taking time to read and comment.
There some pretty ugly slurs made against transgendered women and often it refers to genitalia so I'm not comfortable with the suggestion, Thom. Some would twist it into something ugly even though I know you meant no offense.
FANtastic. this meme looks like so much fun. i wish i had found it earlier but have been too busy... did Thom or Susan write this short piece? masterful writing & well crafted. really enjoyed it.
Mayra, I wrote it. A friend has been persistently nudging me. lol
-S
Lovely! I love being surprised, and boy was I ever! :D
Clever twist...never realised it coming.One word and you did the trick. Enjoyed reading it.
one of the best i read ds time !!
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