Books & Other Passions
did you realize both of these sentences are American? Love both the sentiments expressed.
gurgling is good. :)
These were both nice, but I especially love the second one!
Not sure if the second one was even meant to be poetry but I like it. It really resonates with me. I have been trying to surface for years.The first one is reminescent of a mother/child relationship to me. Homey and safe.
I especially liked the second sentence--almost an apology, where no apology is needed. And the first one is quite warm, and tender--inviting. Lovely.
Thanks Deborah, the first is an initial response to a prompt at rwp and the second one is art imitating life. lol
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did you realize both of these sentences are American? Love both the sentiments expressed.
gurgling is good. :)
These were both nice, but I especially love the second one!
Not sure if the second one was even meant to be poetry but I like it. It really resonates with me. I have been trying to surface for years.
The first one is reminescent of a mother/child relationship to me. Homey and safe.
I especially liked the second sentence--almost an apology, where no apology is needed. And the first one is quite warm, and tender--inviting. Lovely.
Thanks Deborah, the first is an initial response to a prompt at rwp and the second one is art imitating life. lol
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